Monday, July 11, 2011

Is this a good poem? and if its not what could i do to make it better?

little girl doesent understand. she goes to school with a frown on her face and sees her friends and their dads together and doesent understand where her daddy is. so one day she gets the courage to ask her mom, "mommy, wheres daddy? i see all my other friends with their daddys doing things together and ive never even met mine? why mommy? is he on a business trrip? when is he gonna be back?" poor mom didn't know how to answer this so she told her "honey your dad isint here because he loves you so much that he had to go away." little girl was terribly confused "but mommy are you saying that those girls daddys dont love them? and if daddy loved me wouldnt he stay here so he could love me and not have to be gone?" mom finally said "when you were born god sent one of his angels to take daddy away so daddy could work for god. daddy knew that he would never beable to see us again but he did it so that you could have a wonderful future. but you should be lucky because not everybodys dads get to work for god. only special ones, like your dad and if you ever need to contact him just pray to god and god will deliever the message to dad."the little girl finally understood and the next day she went to school with a smile on her face becuase she now understands that her dad is watching over her and that she can always talk to him. whenever shes having trouble with anybody or needs someone to talk to her dad will always be there

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